Post by Boy on May 14, 2006 23:32:00 GMT -5
Congratulations baby on finishing your book. I have never wrote any fictional story nearly as long as your book and I can’t imagine how monumental a task it was. So far I have read the first 27 pages of it. I would have finished it tonight before going to sleep, but I cant read from a computer screen for more then 5 minutes without getting a major headache so I printed it out to read, but my printer ran out of ink after the 27th page was printed.
I am really enjoying the story so far and your descriptions of the land are beautiful. For me one of the interesting aspects of reading your novel is that sometimes I am reading and I forget you wrote it and other times I read a line or passage that reminds me of you.
For Example: when you said that Elysse hair color changed in the sun, your description of the ocean as looking “dangerously angry” the first paragraph of chapter 3, the 4th paragraph of chapter 4, the scene where Henry left Elysse the first time.
My favorite line so far is “the same mind numbing redundancy as this sentence” that made me laugh out loud.
Well I am heading to bed now, but I promise I will buy a new ink cartridge to print the final part of the book, or print it out at a computer at work when no one is looking. (they have been on us for people printing out too many non-work related stuff)
Again congratulations baby.
See you Sunday.
Boy
P.S. Thanks for the Shout Out at the Start of the Book.
I am really enjoying the story so far and your descriptions of the land are beautiful. For me one of the interesting aspects of reading your novel is that sometimes I am reading and I forget you wrote it and other times I read a line or passage that reminds me of you.
For Example: when you said that Elysse hair color changed in the sun, your description of the ocean as looking “dangerously angry” the first paragraph of chapter 3, the 4th paragraph of chapter 4, the scene where Henry left Elysse the first time.
My favorite line so far is “the same mind numbing redundancy as this sentence” that made me laugh out loud.
Well I am heading to bed now, but I promise I will buy a new ink cartridge to print the final part of the book, or print it out at a computer at work when no one is looking. (they have been on us for people printing out too many non-work related stuff)
Again congratulations baby.
See you Sunday.
Boy
P.S. Thanks for the Shout Out at the Start of the Book.
